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Driveway Basketball – Poetry Friday

by Jim on January 20, 2012

This week’s Poetry Friday offering is the result of three faculty lectures from my VCFA residency. Mary Quattlebaum’s lecture Creating A Dynamic Setting, Martine Leavitt’s The Novel in Verse and Sharon Darrow’s Poetry: A Messy Business. I’m not sure I’ve done them justice. Perhaps they’ll appreciate the effort just the same.

The Poetry Friday Roundup is on the Wild Rose Reader this week.

Driveway Basketball

by Jim Hill

Jackets off in October sun,
Tossed to the mossy lawn.

Been playing for a while,
We are good and sweaty.

Ball thuds a muted ring
With every dribble.

I make my move,
Shoulder down,
driving hard.

Randy flows with me.
A truck rumbles by.

I plant my foot,
Sliding in sandy-grit,
Rolling into the garage door.
Face first.

Springs flex, hinges
Reverberate.

Blood fills my mouth.

 

{ 6 comments… read them below or add one }

david e January 20, 2012 at 3:20 pm

gotta love vermont. you come back all charged up and challenged to take on all kinds of new things. great job.

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Jim January 20, 2012 at 3:23 pm

So very true (about being charged up and challenged). Discovered I have an inner academic too. Who knew?

Thanks, David!

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Linda Baie January 20, 2012 at 10:50 pm

I like that ‘Randy flows with me/a truck rumbles by’. The poem is filled with action, until it stops so fast, without two points, but something else. Not what I would have predicted. Nice poem!

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Catherine Johnson January 21, 2012 at 6:25 am

Ouch! Sounds like a passionate game.

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Mary Lee January 21, 2012 at 8:49 am

I agree, Catherine — Ouch!

But Jim, you did a great job getting me into the game. I was right there with your character. Face first. Tasting blood.

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April Halprin Wayland January 27, 2012 at 3:06 am

Love what Mary Lee said…”Face first. Tasting blood!”

For Jan. 27th’s Poetry Friday, TeachingAuthors.com is in with a discussion about awards and a poem about (what else?) WINNING!

Thanks for hosting, Jim!

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