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Patience is a Four Letter Word

by Jim on November 23, 2011

PiBoIdMo is chugging along and I am loving it. It’s very cool to see so many people engaged in the act of creating picture books. It wasn’t that long ago that I was convinced I only had one or two story ideas in me. Certainly not enough to consider actually jumping into the kidlit world.  And because I thought I had so few, I would hold them close, sheltering them from the world. And other writers. And definitely from editors.

Joining writer challenges like PiBoIdMo, and working intently on my own the other eleven months of the year, has shown me that the ideas will come. Heck, not only that they’ll come, but that I can hardly stop them. Ideas are everywhere, in fact, once you develop the habit it’s kind of hard not to notice them. Yet another reason to always carry a notepad to capture those idea in the wild. Bring them home and worry about taming the wee beasties later.

So, yes, it’s awesome that we’re cranking out ideas, but here’s the thing. Not every idea needs to be submitted. Some of our ideas, while fun at the time, just might not be good enough to see print. I’m not just deflating your balloon; mine’s losing pressure too. Let’s take a shot at re-inflating them a bit.

One of the more exciting sessions I went to at LASCBWI 11 was a panel by Jon Sciezka and Stephen Malk. They covered a lot of ground while talking about a career plan, but the real takeaway was the point that I echoed above. Not everything needs to be submitted. Say it with me, it’ll take the sting off.

Not. Everything. Needs. To. Be. Submitted.

Band-aid off? Ready to go? Great. If the National Ambassador for Young People’s Literature (emeritus) doesn’t submit every one of his ideas, maybe we should pay attention to that thought.

You see, at the end of PiBoIdMo you’re going to have a big pile of ideas to weed through. Some are going to sparkle like diamonds. Some are going to stink on ice. A handful will be worth a first draft, revision and development into well-honed manuscripts. You will (rightfully) feel awesome that you stuck with it, found the gems and pursued your craft, turning that brain-burp into a full blown story. This is what we do. We write, we revise. And then, if we’re truly brave, intelligent hardy souls, we think about submitting. And sometimes that answer’s going to be “no.”

Chin up, kid, the process has been worth the effort.

Why wouldn’t you submit your manuscript? I mean, you’ve just worked your proverbial butt off, you’ve got stamps, a well-worn copy of Writer’s Market
chock full of post-it notes and box of envelopes. Let’s go!

Hold on, little chum, let’s look at why we shouldn’t submit. This might hurt a bit, but that’s how we grow. Remember, chin up!

  1. There are too many books like yours out there in the marketplace.
  2. Your idea is preachy. We all want kids to benefit from our books, but being ham-fisted just isn’t the way to go. Take this tip from Seinfeld, “no hugging, no learning.” It worked for them, it’ll work for you. One of the top books of 2011 features a bear that eats the antagonist. Talk about no hugging, no learning!
  3. Your rhyming stinks. This is a tough one to swallow. Editors say they don’t want rhyming books, but we still see a ton of them published every year. And kids love them. “Let me rhyme”, you cry to the heavens! Well, unless you’re rhyming is flawless, unforced and serves the story, step away from the couplets, Joel.
  4. Your writing just isn’t there. Yet. This is probably the hardest one to deal with, and the most difficult to recognize. We have to be brutally honest with ourselves about our brilliant words. Are they really as good as the best picture books you’ve seen? Don’t give yourself an out by citing the books you don’t like that get published (because there are some bad ones out there). Aim high, find the writers that you like best and try to kick their butts. In a friendly, non-competitive way that involves a personal challenge of writing quality and not actual fisticuffs.
  5. If you’re submitting an idea you came up with this month you haven’t worked on it long enough. Write it up, tinker and revise. Then let it sit for a week or two. Even better, bring it to your critique group and let them have at it. Then revise again. Whittle that word count, polish those plot points, and let your manuscript mature like a fine wine.

I know the itch to send it out. I know what it’s like to bask in the glow of accomplishment from hitting “send.” But I also trust that taking a breather between the time you type the final period and the moment you get that teeny-tiny paper cut on your tongue from licking the envelope can mean the difference between “no response means no” and escaping the slush pile.

To paraphrase the immortal words of Johnny Cochran, “If it didn’t sit, you must not submit.”

UPDATE  - If you’re just starting out you might want to read this old post of mine (the same one I linked to in the comments, but I wanted to get it in the post too).

 

{ 17 comments… read them below or add one }

Kelly Korenek November 23, 2011 at 12:40 pm

Thanks, Jim, for this sage advice. I just recently dipped my little toe into the kidlit pool, so I can use all the advice I can get! Better to learn lessons now than to be sorry later!

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Jim November 23, 2011 at 9:36 pm

You’re welcome, Kelly. If you’re just getting into writing for children, do yourself a favor and join the SCBWI.

Take a look at this old post of mine on some tips for starting out:

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Julie Falatko November 23, 2011 at 10:17 pm

Thank you! This is great. I’m so totally bookmarking this to review before I am tempted to send something out for the heck of it.

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Jim November 23, 2011 at 10:25 pm

Hi Julie. Hope it helps.

BTW – I enjoy your book reviews on the Brain Burps podcast!

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Cathy Mealey November 23, 2011 at 10:56 pm

Terrific post Jim…you’ve distilled the painful truths that many of us need to hear into a palatable post. Can I admit my nagging fear? After PiBoIdMo is over, the handful of agents accepting unsolicited PB manuscripts will be completely flooded with submissions that ‘aren’t quite there yet.’ If the slush pile grows ever deeper (higher?) how will that effect the chances for my PB manuscript that I have been dutifully revising, critiqued, revised and polished? Just one of the little thoughts that sometimes keeps me up at night!

Thanks for letting me get that off my chest!

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Jim November 24, 2011 at 8:19 am

I’ve definitely seen agents complaining about rushed subs after NaNoWriMo. As NaPiBoIdMo grows I would expect the same thing.

Wish I knew the secret to break through. I’m working on “get an agent” myself.

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Stacy S. Jensen November 24, 2011 at 4:08 am

Very true. I think stories need time to gel a bit before one even considers submission. Is there a way to subscribe to your blog via email? I may be missing the sign up.

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Jim November 24, 2011 at 8:21 am

Hi Stacy – there isn’t a sign up for email subscription yet. You can subscribe by RSS feed (look for the little orange icon in the right hand column).

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Lynda Shoup November 24, 2011 at 7:39 am

I always enjoy reading your thoughts. These were particularly timely and helpful.

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Jim November 24, 2011 at 8:22 am

Thank, Lynda. Keep writing. I expect to see your books in stores someday!

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Sandie Sing November 24, 2011 at 9:56 pm

I am sitting on mine as we speak. I call it incubation period. I will read it after Christmas and it will be a new story. You are full of resources. Thanks for sharing.

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Suzy Mandel November 24, 2011 at 11:40 pm

You inspired me. Thank you!

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Jennifer DuBose November 30, 2011 at 12:16 am

“…step away from the couplets, Joel.” Ha! I’m still laughing. Great advice here. I’m not new to SCBWI but I’ve yet to do more than tentatively send out my first PB MS (which I did, naturally, long before it was ready, a few years ago) and revise it to death, so much so that I almost can’t stand the sight of it anymore (um, yes, I do have a family and other writing work, etc., but still). Having a blast with the PiBolIdMo thing and looking forward to ‘stepping away’ from that first MS and finally take a stab at a sparkly new idea. Thanks for the laugh!

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Jennifer DuBose November 30, 2011 at 12:17 am

… okay, that would be ‘taking’ a stab ;)

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Jim November 30, 2011 at 8:59 am

I’m just glad someone else got that reference! Maybe I’ll see you at a SCBWI conference someday. ;-)

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Lynda Shoup December 13, 2011 at 7:54 am

JIm, I just reread your post. It was just as good the second time! There’s a lot to think about here and it doesn’t hurt to review.

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Jim December 15, 2011 at 7:22 am

Thanks, Lynda! Now to write a post about getting over the fear of submitting. ;-)

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